
One of those dark nights, the fisherman came to their house, slowly entered a wide open window, he slowly walked along the hall, and one of the members of the family, felt something, but he thought that it was the wind, again the same noise of footsteps in the floor, the wood crushed, all of them woke up, and went out of the room, to see what was happening, the killer was sitting on a small chair, ready to aim and shot his target, when all the 4 people came out saw him, and were shocked, they stand still, staring at the gun, the fisherman finally said "I told you, to go away from that river", draw out a gun fully charged, and shot all 4 of them. He did not care, people heard the shots but they never thought that it was a gun, they thought that they were fireworks. He had his job done, and was happy, he showed sad so nobody would notice that he was the killer. The city turned in a city of blood, he became a serial killer, he also killed the other fishermen. one by one so there would be no clue. He strangled some of them, and shot the others. The spirits of the people started to appear in the town, they were unhappy souls living in the Earth, they could not die in peace. The fisherman who killed them, could not live in peace never again, he got bad luck in everything he did, no fish, no money, lost his friends, and became paranoic, he started to see faces, and things that noone else saw. He became nuts, until, he was out of his mind, he did not know were he was neither who he was, the spirits made him to lose his mind, that was the revenge of the souls of the river.
1 comment:
Hi Jose! I enjoyed reading your scary story, the details you give are amazing and it made me feel a part of the town. I like the ending, too. It's nice how you turn the story's bad guy into a victim. He got what he deserved. Good job!
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